Screen/Haiku/Alliteration

brkenlappy

1.

Willing words waving on

Wraith like within

Walled, wounded computer

2.

Attempting to open up anon

Tech thwarted

Uncovered by screen

3.

Shush those silly secrets

Screened behind

Spoiled, broken interface.

lappyrepair

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3 thoughts on “Screen/Haiku/Alliteration

    • Thanks for the encouraging words. You are right abt the usage of sounds,the second stanza had to move ‘soundless’ ;] to enable the movement of thought.Tnx again n see you on yr platform again.

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